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In every soul
there's a small white path
that we call 'sanity'.
Just beside this sanity
there's a dark sea.
When we take one step
into this sea
our soul gets embraced by darkness
and becomes blind.
This sea is 'insanity'.
sometimes this path of sanity gets broader
and sometimes smaller.
But we still try,
no matter how small the path is,
to walk on in sanity.
But within some souls
this path of sanity
doesn't exist anymore.
So we have to walk in insanity
and sink in, deeper and deeper into the dark sea of madness.
We have no chance to get out by our self anymore,
and can only hope, to meet another soul.
Another soul, that also just had black days, and black nights.
That also just longs for another soul, that has gone through the same
and only waits to be accepted like it is.
These distant souls, that feel like one,
may find the light in our hearts again.
The light, that lets us walk on the sea of sanity.
and puts the gravity to 0.
there's a small white path
that we call 'sanity'.
Just beside this sanity
there's a dark sea.
When we take one step
into this sea
our soul gets embraced by darkness
and becomes blind.
This sea is 'insanity'.
sometimes this path of sanity gets broader
and sometimes smaller.
But we still try,
no matter how small the path is,
to walk on in sanity.
But within some souls
this path of sanity
doesn't exist anymore.
So we have to walk in insanity
and sink in, deeper and deeper into the dark sea of madness.
We have no chance to get out by our self anymore,
and can only hope, to meet another soul.
Another soul, that also just had black days, and black nights.
That also just longs for another soul, that has gone through the same
and only waits to be accepted like it is.
These distant souls, that feel like one,
may find the light in our hearts again.
The light, that lets us walk on the sea of sanity.
and puts the gravity to 0.
There are many things, that made me write this new poem.
I just got inspired of a quote, and as I found a special song, I just had the main topic of this poem.
The madness part came into my mind during a math lesson, and this is when this poem was born.
It took me 'bout 45 minutes to get it in nearly this way, but I haven't uploaded it, since I thought that there was missing something before, and a friend of mine also thought so too.
Just now, I've found the lost piece, and added it
I hope you all like it, and get the feelings I want to express with this poem.
Dedicated to those souls, who are stuck in madness, and are still waiting for another soul
They should also find the light within their hearts
I just got inspired of a quote, and as I found a special song, I just had the main topic of this poem.
The madness part came into my mind during a math lesson, and this is when this poem was born.
It took me 'bout 45 minutes to get it in nearly this way, but I haven't uploaded it, since I thought that there was missing something before, and a friend of mine also thought so too.
Just now, I've found the lost piece, and added it
I hope you all like it, and get the feelings I want to express with this poem.
Dedicated to those souls, who are stuck in madness, and are still waiting for another soul
They should also find the light within their hearts
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Sometimes dipping your feet to feel the water is not such a bad thing it breads understanding.
I'm laughing out loud alone from this piece as I couldn't help add the comment "screw gravity", which is a rather intern joke between me and some friends and I get the picture of my friend pretending to leave the earth as he suddenly decides to "screw gravity", you can what you want we've always been told right?
This is might inappropriate but creates a rather good point
One last thing:
As long as you get back up and get dry again, a little swim wont hurt you, take the dive head first and with a flip or two if you can.
And you you find someone down there along the way, take them with you back up if you can swim.
I've been pulling a friend or two up who cannot swim
I'm laughing out loud alone from this piece as I couldn't help add the comment "screw gravity", which is a rather intern joke between me and some friends and I get the picture of my friend pretending to leave the earth as he suddenly decides to "screw gravity", you can what you want we've always been told right?
This is might inappropriate but creates a rather good point
One last thing:
As long as you get back up and get dry again, a little swim wont hurt you, take the dive head first and with a flip or two if you can.
And you you find someone down there along the way, take them with you back up if you can swim.
I've been pulling a friend or two up who cannot swim