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Magic words

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I'm taking another step forward. Under my bare feet I feel soft grass, and my lips form a smile. It has been a while since I was walking over grass the last time... The last years I just walked over rocks and burnt earth in complete darkness... I've not escaped the darkness right now, but I can see again. During this journey of myself, I met many people, but they were all quite the same... They came to me, and looked if I have something they could need, and finally they left me after knocking me down.

Days later, I still walk over the grass. Slowly I raise my view as I see a tree, and a person sitting under it. I'm coming closer, still not raising my view, and still silent. The fear is still inside me, that the person is just someone who will betray me, like the previous ones. I walk by, hiding myself in the coat of words, I've woven so no one can see my face. But you, you talk to me, and say you like the way how I wove the coat. My foot floats in the air, before I turn around. You, have been the one, who broke the shield that seperated me from the others, and gave me freedom.

We talked a lot, and the hours pass by. Time doesn't matter at all, and I realize, that you are somehow similar to me. 'Though it seems that we just can't be more different, there are things that are so similar that we could be siblings. I tell you about the way I went to get to this point and you tell me about your way, and how you got here. Finally, I know how it is to have someone I can trust, someone I can talk to, someone who helps me. Without wanting it you showed me the hope.

Your past showed me, that there are not only bad people as I thought, there are also good ones who helped you not to go down. You tell me, that you like the way I talk to you, and that you want to help me if I need help. A uncertain smile apears on my lips. I have told you about all the bad things that I've gone through already. And altough that you want to help me, no matter with what. I take your hand, and as you tell me you'll help me with everything, I promise the same to you. Finally, you have given me another word, that I've never understood before. Braveness.

And so the day came you said you have to go on. I hold your hand carefull but you say it has to be. You told me the meaning of much magic words, so I want to give those words back to you.
You showed me the braveness when you told me you will help me, no matter when. I want to be brave and help you with your problems, no matter how hard it will be for me.
The word hope has been a word without meaning so long to me. You gave this word a meaning when we talked with each other. So I want to raise your hopes.
Finally, I have been chased by my own past. You broke the wall that seperated me from the others and gave me the freedom. The freedom to go everywhere where I want without being chased by the past. With this freedom I go with you, and protect your freedom, even if I have to give up my own.
You showed me the meaning of those simple, but magic words, so I'll go with you, to give you back those words you presented me.
Another prose from me... It came into my mind yesterday night before I nearly fell asleep. I'm very proud of this piece of prose since it remembered me about some of the dark days in my past, and although it's not a sad one...
I think this is the first deviation I've written that's not about pain, or something other bad feeling. It's the first one about thanking someone, and with this deviation I want to say thanks to someone...
It's dedicated to ~xinsomniakydx, the girl who really showed me the meaning of those magic words.
I hope I can really put a spell on you with those magic words she showed me...

- Peter, 01.09.2010 22:18, Austria -

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I'm very sure that one day you'll be able to give people the meaning of those magic words, dear :)
You're stronger than what you thought. :heart:

And there's no need to thank Peter, that's what friends do to each other.. :aww: :huggle: