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Rain

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One more time
a crystal raindrop
falls down
right in front of me
and waters
the burnt earth.

My dark hair
is soaked
with the innumerable tears
that fall down
from the cloudy sky.

The water on the ground
plays around
my bare feet
and forces me to take a step forward.

I can't go back.
The path I've taken
to get to this point
has been flooded
and so
there is no way back.

I just can go forward
following this path
that leads me
far away from the place
I came from.

We have just taken too much
from this beauty earth
and destroyed it
with every little step we took.
Now it's just too late
to repair the small things
we've crushed.

The rain doesn't stop falling,
it destroyed everything
and now I'm here
at the top
of this long path.
Lonely.
Nothing but this sea
around me.

Under my feet
there is still
a little spot of earth
that is soaked with water.

Now the sea
plays around
my bare feet
and I take one step forward
into the sea
of darkness.

I know I have to go
I'm still here
in this world
that was once beauty
but now defeated
by the rain.
A poem that came into my mind as I read the Weekly Theme Contest on
:iconda-literature:

I'm really proud of this one 'cause I never thought I would be able to make a poem that would get that long.
This time there is also a special person I dedicate this poem.
It's for my friend Christoph, who told me that he'd like to read more poems from me. And so here is one Chris ;)

Like always: Feel free to write a small critique or write a comment under this deviation

And please
:iconcommentplz::iconreadplz:

Peter - 2nd June 2010 -
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LiitTutubi's avatar
*gerade keine Lust auf Englisch zu kommentieren*
Du hast mir dieses Gedicht schon einmal im Zug gezeigt, also ist es wohl passend wenn ich auch ein Kommentar abgebe. Von den Gedichten die ich bis jetzt von dir gelesen habe gefällt mir das am Besten. Wirklich wunderschön geschrieben und Thematisch gut gewählt. Der letzte Absatz... ich weiß nicht wieso aber irgendwie ist das meine :+fav: Stelle im Gedicht. Allen in allem ein Wundervolles Poem^^

Wie ironisch, es hat gerade draußen zu regnen aufgehört...