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So far away

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A lonely silver tear runs down my cheek
because every word that you were saying to me
and every emotion in your face
stokes the fire of pain in my body
A second tear joins the first.
I don't know what you think
how you feel for me
or if everything is just a lie.
Questions... Nothing more than questions.
And I'm feeling the whole time
how near you are to me
since I see you every day
and tell you what you mean to me.
But the question
how you feel for me
remains unsaid...
As I see you next time
I'm breaking the line.
I'm trying to touch you
but I can't feel anymore
than shattering, cold glass
It seems that I'm having a personal writingflow these days...
Because of this, I'm uploading a new poem here.

This one is just a manifestation of the feelings that I'm having recently. Maybe there are some people out there that feel like me too? I don't know. I just hope that you all know what I want to say with this poem...

Yeah, at least I have to say thanks to :iconfangschrecke: and :iconxinsomniakydx: 'cause both told me I shouldn't stop writing, cause they like my poems. Thank you two :heart:
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Ok... Now I understand what you meant with provoking
I just knew the wort provoking in a bad way, but know I'm a bit more intelligent =D

And now I think I know what you wanted to tell me with the last sentence. Thanks for that praise :hug: